Friday, May 20, 2005

DAREDEVIL #305 Marvel Comics, 1992


This comic book sucks.

Daredevil #305 is the sucky first part of a suck-ass two-issue storyline written by D.G. Chichester with pencils by Scott McDaniel and inks by Chris Ivy. As you can see by the sucky cover, Spider-Man teams up with DD in this issue to fight the menace of The Surgeon General. I’m not including the second part of this gripping saga because – you guessed it – it sucks too.

I don’t mean to be cruel, but I have to call it like I see it. All parties involved have created comics that I enjoy, particularly Scott McDaniel, whose work I generally like. However, the art on this one sucks. Look at the cover, above. Where are they fighting, M.C. Escherland? The fence thing is just a visual mess. Daredevil is placed very strangely on the cover so it looks like he’s standing on the fence, creating the illusion that the fence is in the background – an illusion that is shattered by Spider-Man’s arm wrapping around the same fence. The angles of the fence are all fucked up, too. Plus, one of the spikes is jabbing into Daredevil’s bathing suit area. The whole cover just makes my head spin.

The interior art is not so good. McDaniel’s work has really evolved since the year 1992, during the Dark Age of Comics. The characters in this book all look like buff blow-up sex dolls with creepy glass eyes. Chris Ivy’s inks don’t work with McDaniel’s pencils – the whole thing has a scratchy, sloppy vibe. The coloring mistakes don’t help, either. All in all, the art sucks.

The story makes no damn sense, either. Lest anyone call me to task for making unreasonable demands of a superhero comic, I assure you that I’m judging Daredevil #305 by its own standards. There’s a certain level of realism established in Daredevil and generally speaking, the stories make sense, so I’m not being unreasonable, here.

The plot involves Daredevil and Spider-Man hunting the Surgeon General, a psycho who picks up young men in Manhattan clubs and then removes their organs for sale on the black market. The Surgeon General is a foxy young woman who changes from her clubwear into her surgeon costume before killing her victims – for effect, I guess. Hornhead finds a guy in the Park whose liver has been removed. He brings the dying man to a local hospital, where we’re treated to a scene in the ER that I am guessing would make the good doctor from Polite Dissent cringe:



“Life turns cheap, then it turns up in the emergency room.” “God’s got nothing to do with it, not if this ultrasound’s right!” Those are some poetically jaded doctors! I think Daredevil stumbled into Raymond Chandler Memorial Hospital or something.

The chief flaw of this story – this two-part – story is that it relies on The Riddler Factor to succeed. The villainess Surgeon General has no powers whatsoever and no formidable skills aside from a medical degree - she just has a bandolier full of scalpels and bone-saws and a head full of crazy, yet she’s more than a match for our two seasoned heroes. Shit, it takes two whole issues for Daredevil and Spider-Man to stop her. How is this possible?

The Riddler Factor is that combination of luck, moxie, and plot contrivance that allows lame villains to survive when they are hopelessly outclassed by their superhero opponents. Basically put, the writer is on the villain’s side. It’s how The Riddler manages to survive 22 pages against Batman – sometimes even longer! It’s how Turner D. Century doesn’t get pounded to dust by Spider-Woman. It’s how tons of minor villains actually manage to hurt or annoy Superman. The Riddler Factor is like a big invisible Cloak of Lucky that protects the villain – until your 22 pages is up, that is. Then you get knocked out with one punch.

Writer D.G. Chichester does whatever it takes to keep the Surgeon General out of our hero’s clutches, like making DD and Spidey incredibly incompetent – just for this storyline. Seriously, in Spider-Man’s books he fights Dr. Octopus and The Rhino, cats like that. Here he can’t catch a regular, non-powered woman with a scalpel – and if memory serves, both he and Daredevil get captured in the next issue! Come on, she wouldn’t last two seconds against Spider-Man! I call bullshit on that.

Anyway, to catch the Surgeon General before she kills again Daredevil talks Spider-Man into dressing up like a member of the Village People and hitting the club scene. Sure enough, it only takes one night before she takes the bait, which is convenient. Either that, or the art depicts Peter Parker going out night after night in the same outfit. The Surgeon General lures Spidey out on to an empty penthouse bar, where she’s stashed her costume and paraphernalia. While her potential victim conveniently has his back turned, she changes into her work clothes and sneaks up behind him, making menacing innuendos.

Let’s look:



Village Person Peter Parker (new from Mattel!) is saved at the last second by Daredevil, who tosses him off the edge of the roof before he can get stabbed. What the hell kind of medical instrument is she holding anyway, is that like a Klingon scalpel? Daredevil engages the Surgeon General in combat and promptly gets his ass kicked. In this very issue Daredevil defeated two armed thugs with fancy acrobatics and fu, yet he is suddenly, inexplicably unable to fight this slender woman.

Here’s Daredevil going down like a sucka:



What a chump! The same guy who fights The Hand and Bullseye can’t stop this woman from gassing him into unconsciousness. That’s the Riddler Factor in play right there.

Of course, Spider-Man intervenes before the Surgeon General can use the bonesaw, but he, too is unable to catch this wily unpowered woman. She makes good her escape through a crowded dance club, slashing and stabbing people as she goes while our heroes pursue, apparently in slow-motion. The “horror” of the scene is undercut by the dialogue of the panicked club-goers. Stuff like: "Holy--! A doctor! Somebody get a real—" and "—ain’t worth no cover –" and "Marcus Welby with an attitude!" Reading those lines physically pulls a deep agonized groan of agonized agony from my body.

The Surgeon General jumps into a waiting getaway van driven by her similarly garbed nurse/thugs. Daredevil pursues, but as he jumps inside the van, the invisible hand of The Riddler Factor intervenes once again. The Surgeon General throws an icy cold organ transport case at Daredevil, knocking him out of the van. Fortunately, Spider-Man saves him with a web, but Daredevil is s-s-so cuh-cuh-cold…



What the fuck? Does that make any sense? When the Surgeon General hits DD with the case he thinks, via narration caption: “Sudden searing cold against my abdomen, burning. Chill spreads outward, an icy wildfire locking up my limbs.” Yes, as far as I know human organs are carried in special cold containers, which are probably kept chilly with dry ice or liquid nitrogen or something. How would that make the outside of the case freezing cold? How exactly would anybody carry such a case if it was that fucking cold? You’d have to have special cold-proof robot couriers dressed up like monkeys to carry that.* Yet the case that hits Daredevil is so cold that it instantly incapacitates him, much like the gas earlier.

Either Daredevil is a big wuss, or the writing is just bad. I’m going to choose “b” in this case.

Daredevil #305 is so bad that it makes my soul die a little bit when I read it. Truly it is deserving of “The Pain” award.




*I don’t know, it sounds like a cool idea: Robotic Organ Courier Monkeys.

19 comments:

Greg said...

Ummm ... that ain't McDaniel. Unless it is. I own that comic, and I remember being a little ticked off that it wasn't McDaniel when it came out. Maybe I'm wrong. I certainly not going to go through my long boxes to search for what was, yes, a sucky comic.

In defense of Chichester - I see A LOT of people bashing him on the Internet (which is strange, because when was the last time he worked in comics?), but up until #300, his Daredevil was excellent. He wrote the 290s, and Weeks drew them, and they took down the Kingpin, tying everything back into "Born Again," and at the end, the Kingpin was done. It was a nice, gritty Daredevil story that tied into greater Marvel continuity. Then, inexplicably, he lost it. What happened? How did he go from the Fall of the Kingpin in issues 297-300 to this just five months later. One of the great unsolved mysteries in comics.

The Surgeon General ... God, what a sucky comic.

David Campbell said...

I swear to God, it's Scott McDaniel - I double-checked even! I think it's the Chris Ivy inking that's really to blame here...

I too like the Chichester/Weeks stuff - I should review those - but this stuff and the Tree of Knowledge storyline... Ugh! Anti-quality. Wha happen?

Greg said...

See? This is why you get all the glory - research, research, research. So not only does the story suck, so does the art. Man, that's a bad comic.

David Campbell said...

...and what beautiful photos they are.

Mark W. Hale said...

This is some C. Everett POOP right here, am I right?

Not manly enough to cover both issues? Haha. I can't blame you; I did, and it made me insane. The ending is just fucking brilliant in its absolute retardedness.

Kevin Church said...

As I was reading this, I felt compelled to point out that Chichester's "Fall Of The Kingpin" is a really excellent arc, but then Greg beats me to it. This blog makes me hate people I've never met. Grr.

Anonymous said...

I wonder how well superheros would do battleing in M.C. Escherland? Spiderman would have a hard time swinging off those steps when gravity keeps changing around on him. Batman might get the hang of it eventually.

Anonymous said...

I think this was Scott McDaniel's first regular series- he really didn't get to his current style until the "Fall From Grace" Storyline. Chris Ivy really was one of the worst inkers Marvel had- he would just slop ink on everything, making it ugly, whether it be Rod Ramos, James Fry, Graham Nolan. Bleah.

Anonymous said...

I actually have a Klingon steak knife, Klingon cocktail shaker, and Klingon soup ladle in my kitchen to go with the Klingon scalpel. You never know when the honor of your clan may be challenged while you are serving soup and you will need to respond with the nearest thing you can find that is covered in barbs and serrated edges. You can buy them after 2:00 AM Mountain Time when all our basic cable channels turn into home shopping networks dedicated to selling knives. I can't imagine the late night redneck demographic these things are aimed at.

Yail Bloor

Anonymous said...

This comic does indeed sound horrible, but we shouldn't let its overwhelming suckiness distract us from the fact that if it was a porno, her name would be the Surgeon Genital. Just sayin'.

TheFlash said...

I think daredevel could be standing on the fence because it looks like the part of the fence spidey is wrapping his arm around is the corner than the fence goes back

Anonymous said...

Dude, Raymond Chandler Memorial Hospital. That is a win.

Anonymous said...

Hmmm, appears that Daredevil is leaping from the building BEHIND the fence. Alas the art is so squiffy it's difficult to see.

Give Surgeon General some props Dave, she pwned DD with a cheap tactic. It's not like she bitchslapped him .cmnofo

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